Talk:Suavemente/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:55, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• You could probably be a bit more descriptive in the "alt" for the album cover image

•  Done

• "Suavemente" (the single) was released on April 4, 1998

•  Done

• I understand that some red links on Wikipedia are okay, but since they are the only two in the article, I'd remove the links for "Luna Llena" and "Nuestra Canción"

• I will be creating those articles shortly.

Lead

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• Link Billboard for the first time please to the article "Billboard (magazine)"

• It is linked?

• In all cases: U.S. --> US

•  Done

Background

• Insert a comma after "In 1996" please

•  Done

Release and promotion

• In all cases: U.S. --> US

•  Done

• Insert a comma after "On November 28" please

•  Done

• Rest is absolutely great! Very informative

• Thank you

Reception

• Link "AllMusic" in the "Review scores" box please

•  Done

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• And, Terry Jenkins' AllMusic review is quite short (and even though the actual review is equally short), you could probably state what tracks he highlighted, since he seems to list quite a few in his review

• Added about the mode tune AllMusic listed.

Chart history

• In all cases: U.S. --> US

•  Done

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• Insert a comma after "During its fifth straight week atop the Tropical Albums" please

•  Done

Singles

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• "U.S. Billboard Hot 100 chart..." --> "US Billboard Hot 100 chart..."

•  Done

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• "U.S. radio stations..." --> "US radio stations..."

•  Done

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• Again, I don't know if you need to the link to two non-existent singles' articles... What do you think?
• Although this section is quite informative, it is quite long for an album page, and is usually combined with the "Promotion" section; not like there's a problem with this or anything

• If you feel as though it is too long then I'll trim it if that's an issue?

Impact

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• In all cases: U.S. --> US

•  Done

• Last sentence reworded as "The lead single also became a popular tune in Mexico, where it was used in festivals around the country.[66]" please

•  Done

Track listing

• The "Producer(s)" column is completely empty? I don't know if this was a mistake, or...???

•  Done

• The "Producer(s)" column is still empty; rest is fine

• Unfortunately, AllMusic did not provide this nor did Crespo in the booklet; it only lists the arrangers for each track instead. – jona ✉ 21:41, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

• I have removed it. If you own the CD, perhaps you could check over it? But it's definitely fine for now! Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 02:41, 13 June 2016 (UTC).

• Any other editions of the album?

• There are details about the international releases of the album in the 'release' section.

• Is the writer for "Princesita" really unknown??

• AllMusic didn't know, but I have the CD and I added the composer.

Charts

Chart positions

• The "US Billboard 200" should be the first chart listed here

•  Done

Other notes

• Is there a "Credits and personnel" section that you could add?

•  Done

• Also, please add a "Release history" section to the article as well
• You could add an "External links" section that includes a link to the master copy of the album's "Discogs" page

•  Done

• Add "Category:1998 albums" to the list of categories please

•  Done

End of GA Review:

Another great article from you! I hope to continue reviewing your articles! Meanwhile, this article will be on hold for seven days to allow for changes and any comments/suggestions to be made. Good luck and cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:45, 12 June 2016 (UTC)!

Thanks for your kind words, I have since fixed all issues you pointed out. Thanks again for your review, – jona ✉ 13:08, 12 June 2016 (UTC)