Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog Pocket Adventure

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More information[edit]

I've added some extra information to the article, such as the zone list and multi player info. (Galvy 14:20, 6 February 2006 (UTC))[reply]

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BetacommandBot (talk) 05:27, 24 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

tough article to save...[edit]

i'm trying to look for information on this, and its very difficult, can't find any mainstream reviews from this. not even from famitsu...i'll try to look for more, see if i can find more. hopefully this game gets ported or remade.Lucia Black (talk) 04:21, 27 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 10:32, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this eventually. Cognissonance (talk) 10:32, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • "highly positive reviews" pops out at me as potentially WP:POV. I'd suggest removing "highly" from the lead and reception.
    • Done

Gameplay[edit]

  • "There is a time trial mode which will tank the player" Does this refer to a tank being filled or the informal use of "to fail"? I think clarification is in order.
    • LOL, typo. Should say RANK
  • "two competitive two player modes" If it means what I think it means, there needs to be a hyphen between "two" and "player".
    • yes, changed

Development and release[edit]

  • "the creators of the handheld Neo Geo Pocket Color system, SNK" reads like it refers to SNK as a handheld system. Name SNK before the system to clarify.
    • Rewrote the sentence
  • Add link to 8-bit.
    • done
  • "The game was released in Japan two weeks later" This must be more specific to justify the exact date in the infobox, along with a source that substantiates this, as ref. 9 (IGN) doesn't specify. If ref. 11 (Arcade) does, ignore the additional sourcing.
    • added IGN source with exact date

Overall[edit]

I have a soft spot for smaller articles like this. Nice work. Cognissonance (talk) 12:08, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Cognissonance: Done. Thanks for the review. TarkusABtalk 00:19, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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