Talk:Second Battle of Kitshanga

Military history: African / Post-Cold War

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Draftified[edit]

Hi Jebiguess, I have moved this article to Draft space as it's not currently ready for mainspace. After following recommendations for improvement, please submit the draft through the WP:AFC process. Suggestions:

The lede needs to be clearer. What year did the battle take place?
Who or what is M23 - the link you've used is to a disambiguation page, and all the linked articles are roads.
The first three references are bare URLs (and therefore prone to link rot) - please provide full-format references.
Incorrect date formats used in several references.
Copyedit to clarify abbreviations, etc.

When these issues are fixed, and the article has been moved back to mainspace, please include in appropriate Categories and Wikiprojects. Regards, Bastun^{Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ!} 15:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just fixed most of the issues above, the article should be a lot better now. Jebiguess (talk) 17:33, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have fixed some of the issues, not all. I asked yo uto submit the article through the WP:AFC process; if an article has been moved to draft space, there is good reason, and best practice is to not move the article back yourself. Bastun^{Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ!} 17:38, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]