Talk:Sacred Heart University Luxembourg

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Why was my edit removed?[edit]

Hello User:Materialscientist, A few months ago, I worked with the wikipedia team to improve Sacred Heart University Luxembourg page, ensuring that every piece of text had a correctly formatted citation. One of the people at wikipedia told me that once I made those changes I could remove the maintenance template. I gave it plenty of time for due diligence. I am a student at Sacred Heart University Luxembourg, which is why I am aware of their services, which I do not believe represents a conflict of interest. Please let me know if I am allowed to remove the template after making these necessary updates. Thank you. User:ColinFine did I do this right?

Please note I have removed maintenance template[edit]

Hello, Please note that I have removed the maintenance template from the top of this article after doing due diligence to correct the necessary errors in citation. Thank you, Johanna

I've restored the other 2 maintenance templates and done some minor clean-up work. The article is still packed full of promotional language that reads like it came out of a prospectus rather than an encyclopaedia article, phrases like "tailored to the needs of working professionals", "students receive real-world experience", "Their part-time Executive MBA can be completed at the student’s pace" and describing the course as being able to "adapt to the work and family lives of students" do not have the neutral, formal tone expected of an encyclopaedia article. 192.76.8.74 (talk) 22:03, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]