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Date	Process	Result
February 16, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed
June 21, 2011	Good topic candidate	Promoted

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 21, 2011.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the German armored cruiser SMS Prinz Heinrich (pictured) set the design standard for all subsequent armored cruisers built for the Kaiserliche Marine?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Prinz Heinrich/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 21:41, 15 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
prose: (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments[edit]

1. as opposed Fürst Bismarck. Suggest - as opposed to the Fürst Bismarck

Added "to", though I don't like using "the" with a ship name, but that's just a taste issue. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

2. including during the Battle of the Gulf of Riga in August 1915. Suggest - and was involved in the Battle of the Gulf of Riga in August 1915

Sounds good. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

3. hp in the infobox could do with a link.

Added. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

4. and used in several secondary roles. Suggest - and was used in several secondary roles

Good call. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

5. amidships could do with a link.

Added. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

6. and a top speed of. Suggest - and had a top speed of

Works for me. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

7. with relief effort. Suggest - with the relief effort

I'm not sure why I missed so many little things like that - must've been distracted when I wrote the article. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

8. Miller apparatus. Suggest a link for this

I don't know that there'll ever be an article for this. I've only seen it referenced in the article in Industrial Magazine (and its probably an informal name for whatever the USN designated it as).

9. Suggest a link for van.

Added. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

10. von Ingenohl. Is he the ships Capitan?

The admiral of the fleet - I've clarified this. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 21:41, 15 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 13:46, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work Parsec, once again. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 15:47, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]