Talk:Russian ironclad Sevastopol

Russian ironclad Sevastopol has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 29, 2013. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Russian ironclad Sevastopol appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 October 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Russian ironclad Sevastopol was converted into an ironclad while still under construction in the 1860s?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Russian ironclad Sevastopol/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 00:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

The toolbox checks out.
"an 32-gun": a 32-gun
"; four on the upper deck as chase guns and 28 on the lower deck.": sentence fragment; change the semicolon to a comma
"two gun": two guns
"her armament was changed again and now consisted of fourteen": "... changed again, to fourteen".
- I didn't like the comma after again and went with: "In 1877, her armament was changed again to 14 eight-inch guns".
"that reduced": "reduced" isn't impossible in this sense, but it's a little uncomfortable. How about "that narrowed"?
"All dates used in this article are Old Style": period needed.
"Robert Gardiner": "Gardiner, Robert"
Otherwise:

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
- Dank (push to talk) 00:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All done, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 20:47, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]