Talk:Royal Game of Ur/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hrodvarsson (talk · contribs) 22:20, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

I will review this soon. Hrodvarsson (talk) 22:20, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

A few comments:

• "emigrating back to Israel". Did the Jews in Kochi (Cochin Jews may be a relevant link to add to the article) originally emigrate from the state of Israel? Or from the biblical land of Israel? If it is the latter, back should not be used.
• "The number of marked ends facing upwards after a roll of the die indicates how many spaces a player may move during that turn". Die should be dice here.
• On the topic of the dice, four-sided die may be a useful link to add to the article.
• Regarding the Green 2008 reference, "TIME Magazine" is just Time and should be listed as a magazine rather than a publisher.

Hrodvarsson (talk) 22:10, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

@Hrodvarsson: I believe all the above concerns have now been addressed. --Katolophyromai (talk) 23:32, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

@Katolophyromai: Okay, I don't think there are any other problems. I believe the article meets the GA criteria. Nice job! Hrodvarsson (talk) 23:53, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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