Talk:Robert Thomas (ice hockey)

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Review: May 26, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"As the youngest player on the Blues' roster, Thomas won the Stanley Cup as a member of the team in 2019." Remove "as a member of the team", it's already stated with him being on the roster. Done
Ref 2 doesn't say his dad is a chef. Done
"under 16" Dash needed. Done
Link Fortnite and link Jordan Kyrou earlier. Done
"attend Canada men's national junior ice hockey team U20 Team Summer Development Camp " A "the" can be added after the "and".
- What and? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:07, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Err, I mean "attend". Nova Crystallis (Talk) 16:47, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Blues prospects Jordan Kyrou" Singular. Done
Missing a dot for the ellipsis in the player profile quote. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]