Talk:Rhode Island Route 37/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Comments:
- Recently, a new addition to the MOS called WP:ALT has been introduced that calls for alternative text to be included in an image to help visually impaired readers. The alt= parameter should be added to each image and the junctions in the infobox should use {{jct}}.
- "limited-access freeway" sounds wordy, "freeway" would simply suffice here.
- "freeway began completion"? "completion" should be "construction".
- Do not use "then" in describing progression of route in route description.
- "the freeway and has a complicated interchange" sounds awkward. In addition, what makes the interchange so complicated?
- The sentence "Archaeological research indicated that the portion of Route 37 in Cranston between Exits 2 and 3 was inadvertently constructed over a portion of the State Farm Cemetery in the 1960s; the cemetery's wooden burial markers had deteriorated by the time Route 37 was constructed, and environmental studies that would have indicated the location of the cemetery were not conducted prior to the expressway's construction." needs to be split into two.
I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 00:46, 26 August 2009 (UTC)