Talk:Reptar on Ice/GA1
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Reviewing article... CTJF83Talk 03:19, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
- This might just be my personal preference, but from what I remember Angelica always refers to them as babies, so maybe consider changing infants to babies?....actually I see it both ways, so a consistent term would be good.
- Link 1 no longer links exactly to where it should
- "Reptar had been used since season one, episode three, "At the Movies," as a satirical parody of the fictional Japanese monster, Godzilla." Is this sourced by reference number 7? (I can't check it) If so, please put a reference at the end of this sentence also.
- "Angelica is lean on only eating Reptar brand cereal" It might be my lack of vocabulary, but is lean the correct word here? Consider changing lean to insistent?
- "The ice show the babies attend mocks several different real life ice shows, including "Disney on Ice" and "Barney on Ice."" Is this sourced by #9? If so can you put a reference after Barney on ice, and if not, please find a source
- I'm not sure if it is a policy or not, it's not a huge deal either way.
- Is Decade in Diapers the name of the DVD compilation (as I think it is), then it needs italics, not quotation marks.