Talk:Principe di Carignano-class ironclad

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Review: August 27, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:03, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing for a review. Miyagawa (talk) 10:03, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, let's go. As always, I suspect there won't be much! :)
Lead: Link Frigate at the first appearance (or Steam frigate if you want to mirror the article body)
- Done
Design: The Sardinian Navy/Regia Marina Sarda (Royal Sardinian Navy) thing from the last review again.
- Done
Can you fully spell out "Inps. Eng." the first time? I presume Eng is Engineer, but I have no idea what Inps. is. Guessing at Inspector but that doesn't seem right.
- That's part of the problem - Conway's only says "Insp. Eng." - I'd assume Inspector as well, but I don't know for sure.
General charisteristics: Link Displacement (fluid) at the first "displaced" and Mast (sailing) at the end of the subsection
- Added both
Armament and armor: Mention Conte Verde's belt armor, since you already have it in the lead.
- See if what I added works.
That's the lot. Ping me back when you've had a chance to look at those. Placing on hold. Miyagawa (talk) 11:28, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- @Miyagawa: - thanks for reviewing another article! Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 27 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - Great. Happy to promote to GA on that basis. Miyagawa (talk) 18:31, 27 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]