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Created pageAnne Brygger (talk) 06:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback[edit]

Hi Anne Brygger, here are some thoughts about the article

  • In general, all content on Wikipedia should be referenced. If consecutive sentences come from the same source, the citation can be added once at the end of the consecutive sentences rather than duplicated at the end of each sentence. In that vein, no paragraph should end without a citation, and no paragraphs should lack citations. I see several paragraphs that lack citations, which is a red flag. Where does this content come from? How will the reader know it's verifiable?
  • Avoid remarks that are considered "editorializing". I noticed it where you said another interesting feature... and here where you said Unfortunately,.... For more example of editorializing word and phrases, see here.
  • Just part of the Wikipedia style guide, but citations directly follow punctuation, including commas, periods, and semicolons (Sentence.[1] not Sentence[1]. or Sentence. [1]) I see a couple instances to fix—you can just drag and drop the references to move them where they need to go.

You did a great job creating this article! I'd say your priority moving forward is to add more citations, ensuring no paragraph lacks citations. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:27, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]