Talk:Mansion nightclub

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The Mansion Melbourne is a heritage listed building with a lot of history so i feel it should have part of its story told. I am planing to travel to Melbourne in the next month to get more history on this building and submit it to wikipedia so please dont delete this page. If you still feel it needs to be deleted please let me know what i need to change to make this fit your guidelines.

Thank you

(Originaldoc (talk) 04:36, 24 January 2009 (UTC)).[reply]

Concerns about Article[edit]

This article reads more like a review for a club, and as it stands I cannot recommend it staying on Wikipedia long. It needs (among other things, a LOT more things):

inline citations for statements
get rid of all weasel words ("some people", etc) and any mention of 'rumours'
Remove any kind of speculation e.g. "Perhaps one day the parties will return to the big house they call The Mansion"
Remove all POV phrases e.g. "...it still lives on in their heart" or "Nights to remember".

Jwoodger (talk) 13:56, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]