Talk:Mahonri Young

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I tagged this article because it has no references to speak of.Wuapinmon (talk) 18:15, 21 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Links[edit]

zero of the links provided either work or link directly to examples of Mr. Young's work. Why even bother then when a simple goggle image search get better results. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.244.74.179 (talk) 14:48, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll look, but who do you think fixes these things? Folks such as yourself. And me, sometimes. Einar aka Carptrash (talk) 16:54, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed; they used to work, but websites change over time. -- 208.81.184.4 (talk) 19:45, 17 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Rollidan (talk · contribs) 18:52, 9 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I am excited to begin this review. Be aware that I am still beginning here at WP:GA, so it might take me a while to review it. Thank you for the nomination! Rollidan (talk) 18:52, 9 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, @Rollidan:, are you still planning on reviewing the article? Skyes(BYU) (talk) 17:33, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Yes I am. Thank you for reminding me! Rollidan (talk) 04:12, 7 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Is it verifiable with no original research?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

Read through sources

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Concluding remarks: Thanks for your patience on this review. I will say that the article is quite good overall. I will definitely say it is not quite up to FA-level yet, but luckily GA doesn't need to be perfect, just good. I am in the process of closing the review. Rollidan (talk) 16:53, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]