Talk:Like a Surgeon/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:59, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing the article in the next 2-3 days.

Infobox[edit]

  • Source for release date and which format? CD single, download, radio?
 Done Added.
  • How do you know the genre of the song it's not mentioned anywhere, plus it needs reference.
 Done Added + reference.
  • How do you know the exact day it was recorded? The article only mentions the month.
 Done Removed.

Lead[edit]

  • It could use a little of the "Writing and development" section.
 Done Added.
  • becoming his fifth entry overall → not anymore, some other songs have entered the Hot 100 after this one.
 Done Fixed.

Writing and development[edit]

  • Yankovic sings from the point of view of a new surgeon, singing → other word instead of sings or singing.
 Done Fixed.

Reception[edit]

  • Billboard would later → when?
 Done Added.
  • In Australia, it peaked at number 19, similarly his second highest peak in that country → third at the moment, should be written in a way that doesn't need an update.
 Done Reworded.

Promotion[edit]

  • Fine
 Done Thank you.

Track listing and formats[edit]

  • Fine.
 Done Thank you.

Chart[edit]

  • Fine
 Done Thank you.

See also[edit]

  • Ok.
 Done Thank you.

References[edit]

  • Fine.
 Done Thank you.

Overall GA review[edit]

  • You need a commercial performance section.
My bad then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:22, 8 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add an external link with the lyrics.
 Done Added.
  • Lacks a Credits and personnel section as well.
 Done Added.

@Carbrera: On hold for seven days. It is almost flawless.

@MarioSoulTruthFan: All done! Thanks as usual. Carbrera (talk) 22:22, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Carbrera: I missed one thing, you should create a release history section with process and a infobox, the usual, because that release on the "writing and development" section sticks out like a sore thumb. Sorry, but the rest is just great! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:42, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Now done! Do you think you could maybe take a look at the message I left on your talk page? Thanks so much. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 22:49, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Carbrera: Sure, sorry I totally missed it. First I will pass this article. Congratulations MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:56, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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