Talk:KLJB/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)

Ooo Iowa station! Will get to this within seven days. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the speedy response! Pass. Congrats on another GA. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 01:08, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio

Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me either.

Files

Good to go; File:KLJB 2016 logo.png is on Commons and public domain.

Prose

• In § Early history, wikilink Rock Island, Orion, Quad Cities and Fox as their first mentions in the body.
• "(picking up Channel America programming to fill the void)," – I believe the citation should go after the punctuation instead of before the parentheses.
  • Specific choice here as the citation only covers the material in parentheses.
• "WBQD-LP, a low-power UPN affiliate" – "low-power" (at least in this sentence) sounds rather strange to me; is an alternative word choice available?
  • No, unfortunately. Low-power is a class of TV station in the United States (notice the -LP ending to the call letters).
    • Oh I see now!
• "In an unusual arrangement, the production of the newscast was outsourced to Davenport" – very picky concern but how about removing the to make the sentence flow more smoothly?
• "For EBI Video, the KLJB partnership" – looking at the rest of the article, I believe this sentence should now say "EBI" for consistency.

@LunaEatsTuna: All items addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:54, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

References

Passes spotcheck on refs 7; 15; 20; 35; 42 and 50.

• Add url=dead on refs 27 and 28.
  • The articles are still live at new URLs.
    • Thanks for adding them!
• Some citations for the Quad-City Times include the location parameter whilst others do not; is there a reason for this?
  • Code changes/inconsistencies in PressPass. The location parameter only worked in one way of getting the citation and I used two methods. (Said method no longer works at all thanks to changes in newspapers.com.) Did some cleanup here to make them more consistent.

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