Talk:K-52 (Kansas highway)

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:K-52 (Kansas highway)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:31, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "23.045-mile-long (37.087 km)" feels a little too accurate for a lead sentence.
  • Is there any way the map could put it into context of Kansas or even the US? I've seen articles where there are radio buttons to select the relevant scale.
  • "K-52's western terminus.." Its.
  • "Three miles later" convert.
  • "was quickly extended" do you mean soon after or the work was done in sharpish time?
  • "of 1937. In 1987" bit repetitive.
    • I agree with you totally, just not sure how to chnage it. Do you have a suggestion? -420Traveler (talk) 13:39, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 2 is dead, suggest an archive is made/found.
    • I fixed the link, let me know if its still not working. -420Traveler (talk) 15:24, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • ".3 miles" etc, leading zeros here and hereafter.
  • "passes a cemetery and passes" repetitive.
  • Link freeway.
  • "The National Highway System is a system of highways important " this feels like a footnote rather than directly relevant to the K-52.
  • "Before state highways were numbered.." could relink state highways (only linked in the lead, not the main part of the article).
  • "were auto trails, which were an informal" either lose the comma or lose "which were".
  • "Kansas City-Fort Scott-Miami-Tulsa" en-dashes?
  • "stair-stepped" what does that mean?
  • "in a February 11, 1964 resolution" comma after year.
    • I may be wrong, but I think the comma should be after "resolution" in this case. I dont think it would be correct to have a comma after both.? -420Traveler (talk) 14:48, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " January 26, 1995 resolution" ditto.
  • "a 0.381 miles (0.613 km) was" eh? and expect it should be adj=on too.
  • "c. 1: 211,200" why the space.
  • Year ranges should use en-dash (see ref 20)
  • Is that last external link a reliable source?

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 11:07, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, map and comma notwithstanding, it's generally in good nick and neither of those issues should prevent it being promoted to GA. So I'm promoting it to GA. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 22:14, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]