Talk:John Joscelyn/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Parrot of Doom 13:26, 16 August 2010 (UTC)
Reviewing... Parrot of Doom 13:26, 16 August 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- "John Joscelyn was their third son to survive childhood" - might infancy be a better phrase? I'm presuming of course that most children who die do so in infancy.
- "and was probably born at High Roding, Essex, where his father had an estate" - would the alternative phrasing, "and was probably born on his father's estate at High Roding, Essex" be original research?
- "Parker named Joscelyn to a chaplainacy in 1559 shortly after Parker was appointed as archbishop" - who is Parker? The lead names him, but the body doesn't (the sentence has changed slightly as I copyedited it).
- "Besides Greek and Latin, Joscelyn knew Hebrew" - knew it, could speak it, could write it...or just "knew" that Hebrew existed?
- "'Joscelyn's contributions to the study of Old English have been called "a significant contribution to the development of the study of the language'" - by whom?
- "Joscelyn died on 28 December 1602, probably at High Roding, and was buried in All Saint's Church in High Roding. He never married.[1]" - this should come before any mention of his legacy.
Apart from the above minor points, all is well and I'm happy its of GA-standard. Parrot of Doom 13:47, 16 August 2010 (UTC)