Talk:Jerry Navarro Elizalde

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Zerondar[edit]

The claims on you article may not be supported by a single reference, you must seek for a few articles that could strengthen your claims but your article seems pretty decent for me, interesting choice of artist. Zerondar (talk) 00:48, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Rrrrraymond[edit]

Greetings Wataru43, I've read sandbox and found it interesting. Although it was a bit short, I was still very informative to me. Rrrrraymond (talk) 00:47, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

wieluxx[edit]

Goodmorning/Goodevening, kindly check out my sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wieluxx/sandbox Thankyou and have a nice day!Wieluxx (talk) 00:50, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Bolero24[edit]

Greetings Wataru43, I've read your sandbox. Your article seems pretty decent for me and it's interesting choice of artist. Bolero24 (talk) 00:56, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Sgenriel[edit]

Hello, your sandbox is good, i like it Sgenriel (talk) 01:05, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment from JaLoves[edit]

Your sandbox page is well defined. It has rooms for development and enhancement. Try to put some images. JaLoves (talk) 01:23, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hugocfad666[edit]

Hello. You're sandbox is well-written. Hugocfad666 (talk) 01:09, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments regarding your sandbox article[edit]

Hi Wataru43, I read your article and here are my comments:

You weren't able to cite your references properly. Please read the guidelines for referencing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners
In addition, you only cited one reference and I suggest that you add more sources as one internet link is not enough. I also suggest that you write the content under the "Exhibits and Works" subsection in a tabular form in order to make it easier for your viewers to read and understand. There also seem to be a few grammatical and capitalisation errors in your article.

Renee1483 (talk) 01:19, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment[edit]

I've read your sandbox, i suggest you add pictures of the artworks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yemyemyem (talk • contribs) 01:31, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi[edit]

Interesting page and informative.Ellasexygandara (talk) 01:57, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]