Talk:Janette Beckman

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It's a well written article with good references about a notable subject. However the tone of the article while not containing peacock terms does read like a promotional piece. It could be made a little more matter-fo-fact. Wwwhatsup (talk) 03:14, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

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Not credible

This article is one of a number created by Jgrahame about photographers; these first came to my attention via AfD/Thatcher Keats, which itself prompted AfD/Marissa Roth. Both had references that, on inspection, turned out not to say what they were presented as saying.

The contributor has also created Rose Marasco (first edit), Cey Adams (first edit), Lori Nix (first edit), John G. Zimmerman (first edit), Michael Putland (first edit), and this one (first edit). Until each has its every reference checked, it should carry Template:Cite check.

As a start, I looked at a single paragraph within this article. I found three mis-citations. -- Hoary (talk) 01:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Attempt to create an authentic page

There's a lot of talk around the pages I have made over the years. I don't understand why the tone of the complaints is so suspicious. I have tried to make good, authentic entries, looking at others as guides, but apparently the way I have written them all is problematic. It has never been apparent that Wikipedia entries need to be written by some sort of Wikipedia expert. I enjoyed it but I won't contribute again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jgrahame (talk • contribs) 17:16, 13 March 2018 (UTC)