Talk:Jane Moran

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Did you know... that Australian Stinger Jane Moran is only the second woman ever to have competed in 200 games in the National Water Polo League?

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Work needed for GA[edit]

Jane Moran

Water Polo Australia information needs to be included: Supporting facts need to be added to the article and cited to Water Polo Australia. Water Polo Australia source needs to be used to support existing facts. WPA source.
Australian Olympic Committee information needs to be included: Supporting facts need to be added to the article and cited to Australian Olympic Committee. Australian Olympic Committee source needs to be used to support existing facts. AOC Source
Where was Moran playing club water polo in 2009 and 2010? Information needs to be included in the article.
Lead needs to be written in a better summary style.
Red links need to be checked for each article: Find correct links if they exist or selectively remove some of them if they appear redundant.
Flow of the article needs to be checked. I write point. point. point. point. This can be choppy.

That is what I think needs to be done before having it ready for GA nomination.--LauraHale (talk) 02:26, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment on edits[edit]

"During the 2009 and 2010 club seasons, she took time off to focus on preparing for the Olympics, and on her job as a civil engineer for Aurecon. " This was put into the Club section. It doesn't appear to deal with her club. That she works for Aurecon should probably be in the personal section. What club was she playing for in those seasons? The text wasn't integrated in. This information needs to be better integrated and club information for the missing years still needs to be found. --LauraHale (talk) 08:35, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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