Talk:Harold L. George/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:23, 19 December 2009 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
    Lead too short; ranks not relevant for a lead.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    needs one cite
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Did he marry and have a family?
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Okay, I see your comments but I will not be online enough to fix them until about December 28. I'm very interested in making the article as good as it can be, so thanks in advance for a few days of leeway. Binksternet (talk) 00:59, 24 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
There's no real urgency, despite what the boilerplate says. God knows I'm not getting a whole lot of my own stuff done this month. But I will formally put it on hold if you need more time after the first of the year.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:42, 24 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

<=Lede has been expanded, with ranks taken out. More to follow. Binksternet (talk) 03:51, 1 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lede looks good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:00, 1 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think the questions about sources are all cleared up. I have found a very small bit of information about the name of the wife and the fact of four children surviving him. Are we there yet? Binksternet (talk) 06:05, 7 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Just about. Add the location of death to the infobox and we'll be done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:41, 11 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, infobox now has place of death. Binksternet (talk) 00:06, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]