Talk:French destroyer Le Hardi

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Review: September 13, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 07:39, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this one. Zawed (talk) 07:39, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead: "July Attack on Mers-el-Kébir": suggest rephrasing to "July attack on Mers-el-Kébir". I can't see this mentioned in the body?
Perhaps add commissioning date to infobox
"Le Hardi was built by A C de la Loire": recite the shipbuilders' name in full for consistency with infobox?
"550-millimeter (21.7 in) torpedo tubes,"; should the dimensions of the tubes be presented in the same style as for the guns? i.e. millmeter vs mm?
Image tags check out OK
External link OK
No dabs, no dupe links

Will check back in a few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:01, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:16, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Looks fine, passing as a good article, I consider this meets the GA criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 22:27, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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