Talk:Elizabeth Carew

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To @NocturnalAudax[edit]

Hey @NocturnalAudax! It was a good idea to add in a section about King Henry VIII's mistress as it made the article look more helpful than what it would initially be. However, I do not know what you edited in the "Life" section. Overall, this is a good edit. Y33T 0321 (talk) 20:39, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Subtitles and Photo Addition[edit]

I think adding a photo and editing the subtitles to be a bit more descriptive could be really helpful. Vcgmu (talk) 03:41, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that photo additions may be helpful. It does not seem like there are photos for Elizabeth Carew herself, but there are of some other mentioned in the article. I think it would make the page look more engaging and visuals are always helpful. 3ez r4ay (talk) 19:50, 5 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting of Life Section[edit]

The formatting of the "life" section feels a bit disjointed at the end, where it details her death and then goes into one of her favorite pastimes in. Perhaps moving the paragraph talking about interest in literature before the paragraph about her death would make the section flow better. ZGMU (talk) 00:40, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Section Renames, Reorganization[edit]

The "Life" section could definitely be broken down into sub sections as this article was already about her life - you could reorganize the article by having the "Mistress of Henry VIII?" section somewhere in the middle where it's chronologically accurate. Also, the "Issue" section should probably be renamed as it doesn't make sense with it talking about her offspring/children and their lives. A3ec6fYprq (talk) 03:33, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Issue is the standard term for talking about offspring/children on Wikipedia ProcrastinatingHistorian (talk) 15:51, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]