Talk:Edziza Formation

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Review: April 5, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs) 00:21, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Didn't realise I haven't claimed this. I'm on mobile, please expect comments tonight or tomorrow morning. ♦ JAGUAR 22:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"comprise the central stratovolcano of Mount Edziza, as well as lava domes on the summit and flanks of the stratovolcano." - repetition, rephrase to simply comprise the central stratovolcano of Mount Edziza, as well as lava domes on its summit and flanks.
Done. Volcanoguy 16:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"similar to trachyte of the Kakiddi Formation which was erupted 0.3 million years ago" - the 'was' seems redundant here

I'm not too sure about this. Volcanoguy 16:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"The lower assemblage encloses up to 120-metre-long (390-foot) and 15-metre-thick (49-foot) lavas" - geology isn't my forté, but what does lavas mean here?
Plural for lava. Volcanoguy 16:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
" northwesterly lobe partially encircles Tsekone Ridge and borders and overrides breccia of Pillow Ridge." - reads choppy
I'm not sure of a better way to reword this. Volcanoguy 16:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well... as much as I don't like leaving short reviews, there's simply nothing else to add here. It's well written, comprehensive and simply put meets the GA criteria. As such I'm compelled to pass it, well done once again. ♦ JAGUAR 22:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: I've responded to all of your comments. Volcanoguy 16:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]