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This article has been copy-edited to cut down on Peacock phrases, but still requires clean-up, wikifying and better use of the many references. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Further copy-editing to further reduce plethora of Peacock phrases whilst retaining facts. The article transparently reads as an item of publicity. A number of 'references' are incomplete, pointing only back to the use of the reference in the article itself. The list of all exhibitions is detailed to the extent of the full cv on the artist's own web site, which appears to be the primary source for the whole article, though since reduced by editing, as mentioned on two occasions.