Talk:Dansk Datamatik Center

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Review: January 22, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Dansk Datamatik Center appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 February 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Ada language compiler that Dansk Datamatik Center developed in the early 1980s has been termed an underappreciated success story in the use of formal methods?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2016/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Dansk Datamatik Center.

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Dansk Datamatik Center/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 21:29, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Some c/e done, also see comments below
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
Ideally there would be identifiers such as isbn for all print sources, but I don't see that as necessary for GA level.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"80 Kb code and 110 Kb data" I assume this is Kilobit but I'm not sure. It should be specified in the article.
"Well-formedness criteria were used to supply additional constraints on operations beyond what was defined by the abstract syntax." I am not quite sure what this means, possibly it should be rewritten to be more clear or include relevant wikilinks.
the Vienna Development Method — I think it would benefit from a bit more explanation what this is
What is OEM?
"A year later DDC-I, Inc. followed in the United States" doesn't explain the connection
"seeding them with as many as a hundred software designers and developers who had worked at DDC" -> the verb "seeding" is unnecessary jargon

(t · c) buidhe 00:46, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Buidhe: Thanks very much for taking on this review. I believe I have now made changes to address all of your listed comments. I also looked at your direct copyedits and I am fine with them, although in one case I further elaborated on the point being made. Wasted Time R (talk) 23:50, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]