Talk:Choking Doberman

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Proposing a rewrite[edit]

Hi. I'm in the planning stages of a rewrite of this page because it could be better. I'm welcome to advice, suggestions, and input because those things are awesome. Please post them here. I'll update when I have progressed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rap Chart Mike (talk • contribs) 16:39, 10 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

By all means, have at it. I once looked at improving this page, but once I started to look for sources that weren't basically referenced back to Brunvand's work, I was stymied. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 17:04, 10 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That is very much the issue I'm running into. It might just turn into a basic rewrite or die before it gets out of the gate.Rap Chart Mike (talk) 18:37, 10 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Rewrite of this page is live[edit]

I dug as deep as I was able to and I think I expanded the scope of the article and improved the referenced material. I was not able to get a direct citation from the supposed original article in the New Times though, so if someone can find that it'd be an improvement and I couldn't find any pics that were on Wikimedia.

Thoughts on it?Rap Chart Mike (talk) 12:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]