Talk:Characters of the Final Fantasy Type-0 universe/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:34, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this finished soon. JAGUAR  21:34, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• " an action role-playing video game developed and published by Square Enix in 2011" - link action game, role-playing game and Square Enix
• "Type-0 was re-released internationally in 2015 as a high-definition remaster" - for what console?
• "Much of the original story, which mainly revolved about defying the gods" - around
• "After the platform change, Tabata adopted a story-telling style similar to a documentary film" - which platform was Type-0 originally developed for? Would be good to know here
• "Tabata resurrected his initial concept for a mobile game as the prequel Final Fantasy Agito" - de-link this as it is already linked before
• "Characters from the game, include Ace, Mog, Machina and other members of Class Zero" - including?
• "Heath Hindman, writing for PlayStation Lifestyle, calling the characters "pretty strong overall"" - I may be wrong, but should this be italicised?
• No dead links
• No dab links

I spotted a couple of minor prose errors, but once they have all been addressed then this should easily pass. Good work with this one. JAGUAR  17:44, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: I've addressed the issues. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:10, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Passed. JAGUAR  18:13, 6 April 2016 (UTC)