Talk:Burkard Schliessmann

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This article requires copyediting[edit]

The use of ALL CAPITAL LETTERS for names and titles of albums, works, composers, etc. is contrary to the Wikipedia Manual of Style and needs to be corrected to the proper formatting. Note also, do not refer to the subject as "Mr." or repeatedly by his first name + surname, again per the MoS. There are several other aspects of this article which could use a skilled copyeditor whose native language is English. Please do not remove the maintenance tag until these issues have been fully addressed. Voceditenore (talk) 12:47, 12 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've now done most of the required copyediting myself, addressing the issues of the use of ALL CAPITAL LETTERS for names and titles, and the repeated reference to the subject as "Mr. Schliessmann" and/or by first name + surname. I have removed the the maintenance tag. However, the article would still greatly benefit from further copyediting for coherence, flow, and idiomatic English. Voceditenore (talk) 11:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Some nerve; "Fanfare" is a joke of a reviews magazine where you *pay* to have articles and reviews published. This is the only Wikipedia article I've ever seen where the article quotes Fanfare quoting the subject of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.233.117.221 (talk) 00:35, 31 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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