Talk:Bandyup Women's Prison

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Redundancy?[edit]

Prior to editing this, I thought I'd present my point of view so that others may discuss its merits, or lack thereof.

The opening sentence in the body of this article seems completely redundant to me, I paraphrase: Bandyup Women's Prison is a women's prison located . . .

Wouldn't it make more sense to say it thusly:

Bandyup Women's Prison is located . . .

Go ahead, tear me to pieces. Magnet For Knowledge (talk) 01:24, 30 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"tear me to pieces..." - and why would anyone do that? Go ahead, be bold. Moondyne 10:01, 30 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]