Talk:Ajtony/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Cheers! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written as always. Only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:46, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
- Background
- When you begin the article, I think it would be a good start to say "AD" though it is evident.
- I think it is helpful to add something like "churchman" before Regino of Prüm, some readers may not wish to chase links to know who he was.
- is the subject of scholarly debate I think it should be "a" and not "the"
- In primary sources
- "Florin Curta", "county" and "Gerard" are duplinks
- In modern historiography
- Who are László Makkai and Alexandru Madgearu?
- Makkai is mentioned a second time but with his full name, only the last name will do. Likewise for Ioan Aurel Pop and Florin Curta.
- Sainsf, thank you for your comprehensive review. Sorry for waiting so long, but I am quite busy in real life now. I made all the changes you suggested above, but I think "county" could remain a duplink (it is a quite special category in the context, and it is linked in the lead for the first time). I must be grateful to Miniapolis for the style of the article, because his/her copyedit highly improved its quality. Borsoka (talk) 04:10, 9 June 2016 (UTC)