Talk:A Rugrats Passover/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: @harej 07:09, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): See below.
- b (MoS): Some terms are linked twice: 1995 in television, some of the writers' names, and the Exodus to name a few.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): Yes
- b (citations to reliable sources): Yes
- c (OR): No original research
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): The "Production" section seems lacking. Supposedly a different production method was used, but this is not elaborated upon.
- b (focused): Yes
- b (focused): Yes
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias: Yes
- Fair representation without bias: Yes
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.: No edit wars
- No edit wars, etc.: No edit wars
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): Yes
- b (appropriate use with suitable captions): Is the picture of Moses really necessary?
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail: Pass
- Pass/Fail: Pass
- I suggest recasting "special season three episode".
- "Minka is upset and cries to her daughter Didi as she and the family arrives." I suspect "she" refers to Didi, but this could be made clearer.
- "The Pharaoh's treachery causes Moses to curse her once more, with a plague that declares all first-born Egyptian children will be taken, which includes the Pharaoh." So the Pharaoh is the child? My understanding of the Exodus story is that it was Pharoah's son that was killed, not the Pharaoh himself.
- "Gabor Csupo, co-creator of Rugrats,[5] however, stated that the episode was of significant importance because of the "historical interest" and the different production approach used." How was this episode produced differently from the others?
- "while Stew and his side of the family's beliefs focus on an opposite sanctification." What is an opposite sanctification?
- "it received incredibly high Nielsen Ratings" This is a subjective statement.
- How? The Flash {talk} 15:27, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- Well, "incredibly high" is a matter of perception. High compared to what? It would be more appropriate to put the actual rating, perhaps in addition to noting that the rating this episode did receive is in fact high compared to most other TV shows. (Besides, I am pretty sure every episode of Rugrats had an incredibly high Nielsen rating compared to Emily's Reasons Why Not). @harej 20:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- The source only says that it was the "highest rated program" Nick broadcast at the time.
The actual rating is unknown. Is there any way you want me to reword it to fit better?The Flash {talk} 20:29, 7 November 2009 (UTC)- Reworded to say "[...]incredibly high Nielsen Ratings compared to other television programs[...]" The Flash {talk} 20:32, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- The source only says that it was the "highest rated program" Nick broadcast at the time.
- Well, "incredibly high" is a matter of perception. High compared to what? It would be more appropriate to put the actual rating, perhaps in addition to noting that the rating this episode did receive is in fact high compared to most other TV shows. (Besides, I am pretty sure every episode of Rugrats had an incredibly high Nielsen rating compared to Emily's Reasons Why Not). @harej 20:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- How? The Flash {talk} 15:27, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
- "aired and contracted 3.7 million viewers" Is "contracted" really the right verb to use here?
- @harej 07:47, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
I have promoted the article. @harej 20:56, 7 November 2009 (UTC)