Talk:2019 World Athletics Championships – Men's marathon

2019 World Athletics Championships – Men's marathon has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 11, 2020. (Reviewed version).

A fact from 2019 World Athletics Championships – Men's marathon appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 30 June 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the men's marathon at the 2019 World Athletics Championships (pictured) started just before midnight?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2020/June. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/2019 World Athletics Championships – Men's marathon.

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Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:50, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Runners during the 2019 men's marathon

... that the men's marathon at the 2019 World Athletics Championships started just before midnight? Source: "Final: SATURDAY 05 OCTOBER 2019, 23:59" (World Athletics)

Reviewed: 1973 Londonderry City Council election

5x expanded by Harrias (talk). Self-nominated at 12:59, 21 June 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Hi Harrias, review follows: article 5x expanded on 21 June; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing from a spot check on sources; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article and backed up by the sources (some of the sources in the article pre-date the run but the World Athletics source confirms it started at 23:59); image is appropriate, OK at small scale and confirmed a CCby2.0 license at the source; a QPQ has been carried out. No issues here - Dumelow (talk) 14:03, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers Dumelow; would you be able to add the appropriate check mark? Harrias ^talk 14:24, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Doh! - Dumelow (talk) 16:02, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2019 World Athletics Championships – Men's marathon/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 17:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures[edit]

It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

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Lede[edit]

2:10:40 - perhaps mention this is in hours, as this could be any timescale.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:01, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Changed on first use for clarity, but as H:MM:SS is acceptable under the MOS, I have left the rest. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 20:45, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
30 KM, is this 30 km into the race, or 30 to go? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:01, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Clarified as "After 30 kilometres (19 mi).."}} Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 20:45, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
presumably the race also took place on 6 October 2019? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:01, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Fair point, clarified in the infobox. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 20:45, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

General[edit]

preparing for the Ineos 1:59 Challenge.- is this covered by ref 8? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:04, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, the source doesn't mention it by name, but it says "Eliud Kipchoge, the Olympic champion, is preparing to go under two hours in Vienna". Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 20:47, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
rest of preview is good, but is "preview" the right word? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:04, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- It's what was the standard for these, but I agree that it doesn't quite encapsulate it; would "Background" be an improvement, do you reckon. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 20:47, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Background isn't quite right either, but its better than preview. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:11, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Review meta comments[edit]

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 17:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- There's one comment I made but it's not important to stop a promotion. Well done. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:12, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Cheers Lee Vilenski, you missed out the ~~~~~ in the {{GA}} on the article talk page. Harrias ^{(he/him) • talk} 08:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]