Talk:2016 Long Beach ePrix

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2016 Long Beach ePrix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will also review this article. Kpg jhp jm 16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

held before a crowd of 17,000 spectators on April 2, 2016 --> {{xt|held on April 2, 2016 before a crowd of 17,000 spectators.
fastest driver of qualifying --> fastest driver in qualifying .
Make the words consistent - either write di Grassi or Di Grassi.

Background[edit]

No issues

Practice and qualifying[edit]

winner of the Long Beach Grand Prix - Link Long Beach Grand Prix.
in the 2011 event and the 2014 race - in 2011 and in 2014 .
that Virgin's Jean-Éric Vergne bettered - that was bettered by Virgin's Jean -Éric Vergne.
As with the first session, practice --> As with the first session, the second session of free practice .
accelerator pedal as lost a large amount of grip entering the first turn Did you mean and lost ?

Race[edit]

from earlier in the event --> from the incident earlier in the event .
cosmetic damage to his car - What is cosmetic damage ?

Post-race[edit]

No issues

Classification[edit]

Why the names of some drivers are in bold ?

Comments[edit]

@MWright96: The review is now done . Kpgjhpjm 12:52, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kpgjhpjm: All of the above points have been taken action upon and some supplementary changes have been made to the article. To answer the question about the drivers' names in bold, it indincates which ones scored points because of their finishing positions or earned points for scoring the pole position or setting the fastest lap of the race. MWright96 (talk) 13:22, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]