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Can you clarify who Robert Laupula is? --I believe the sentence clarifies it well enough? If not, could you give me an example?
"TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games" - rewrite to The TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games -- Done
" Isala T. Isala is currently the secretary general," Think Isala T. Isala is the current secretary general would be an improvement over the current version. -- Done
"and Manoa set a national record in the event." - clarify for readers that Manoa set a national record in the women's 100 metres dash. --Sounds a bit awkward, but done.
You've made a good effort on this so far. On hold until the issues have been resolved. MWright96(talk) 18:26, 26 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@DatGuy: Looking back with who Robert Laupula is, I believe that is now a non-issue. With that said this article can now be promoted to GA class. MWright96(talk) 08:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]