Talk:El Negrillar

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Possible spelling and grammar errors[edit]

Hello Jo-Jo Eumerus, I saw that the nominated this article for GA status. I'm currently experimenting with a script to automatically detect spelling and grammar errors, I hope you don't mind being my guinea pig. Feedback and improvement suggestions are welcome.

Detected possible errors:

  • Sentence: The vents are spread over three sectors, and the northern in an eastern and a western sector.
    • Correction: replace "northern in an eastern and a western sector" with "northern sector is divided into an eastern and a western sector"
    • Explanation: clarity and grammatical structure
  • Sentence: Ages of the volcanoes range from 982,000 ± 8,000 to 141,000 ± 72,000 years, and is often not reflected in the appearance of the vents.
    • Correction: replace "is" with "are"
    • Explanation: subject-verb agreement
  • Sentence: It is possible that a change in tectonic regimen from compressive to extensive 780,000 years ago allowed the ascent of magma.
    • Correction: replace "regimen" with "regime"
    • Explanation: "Regimen" refers to a systematic plan or set of rules, typically for health, while "regime" refers to a system or planned way of doing things, especially one imposed from above, which is more appropriate in the context of tectonics.

Phlsph7 (talk) 15:47, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

They seem fine for me. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:08, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the feedback, I'm still trying to figure out how to best configure the script to avoid false positives. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:42, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:El Negrillar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk · contribs) 15:06, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kusma (talk · contribs) 16:18, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Will review this in a few days. —Kusma (talk) 16:18, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Content and prose review[edit]

  • Lead: check later.
  • What does the name mean? Alternative name "Negros de Aras" is only in the infobox, not in the body, although it seems to be used.
  • Geography: Stratovolcanoes [..] include Socompa south, Pular east of the volcanic field perhaps clearer with "to the South of" or similar.
  • Check your links. Monturaqui is a volcano, and Peine a town in Germany. You probably mean es:Peine (Chile).

More later! —Kusma (talk) 21:12, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source spotchecks[edit]

General comments and GA criteria[edit]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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