User talk:Haydendp

Peer Review - Percussion Article

(Sent from my phone, will go back and fix formatting/create a new section with this info later. Sorry!)

Lead Section: very clear and to the point, provides a solid overview of the topic. I don’t think anything needs to be changed.

Body Section: if there’s a certain piece that they were inducted into the hall of fame for, that may be a good thing to add. If not that’s okay though, I understand that it could be their entire body of work that achieved that.

I would look at the repetoire section as well and see if you can work on the formatting at all. I would bold each composer’s name to add distinction of where one’s work begins and ends. I realize that you’ve already done that by listing each composer, but this would help draw attention to where each one begins.

An audio clip of a performance, a picture of the founding members, or a short video clip of a performance could also help. Not totally necessary, but an idea.

Overall, great start. All of the information is relevant and unbiased. With a bit of formatting and filling in the content gaps (discography, collaborations), I think you’ll be in great shape. Nice job!

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Percussion Group Cincinnati moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Percussion Group Cincinnati, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Boleyn (talk) 14:25, 3 November 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Percussion Group Cincinnati

Hello, Haydendp. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Percussion Group Cincinnati".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. TheTrainNoch (talk) 02:51, 27 July 2019 (UTC)