Talk:Northwest Airlines Flight 421/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments:

1. The lead of the article is very short. More information should be added to provide a summary of the article.
2. There are several short paragraphs throughout the article. These should be combined to form longer paragraphs.
3. Are there any pictures that can be added to the article?

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC)

1. Expanded the lead with information about the cause of the crash and aftermath of the investigation.
2. The short paragraphs in section "Flight" were consolidated and/or expanded.
3. Commons has no images of Martin 2-0-2 aircraft whatsoever. I uploaded the single schematic from the CAB report (wing root assembly) and put it in. Otherwise, no -- there are no other suitable images available that I know of.

--Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû 20:29, 4 December 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 02:26, 5 December 2009 (UTC)