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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Buggie111 (talk · contribs) 00:21, 1 January 2012 (UTC) Happy New Year, Nate! Let's check this baby out ...:)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

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Review[edit]

Well-written:

Criteria	=tes	Result
(a) (prose)	longitudinal-link or definition would be nice, thikc: is this some sort of British English I don't know about? :)	Undetermined
(b) (MoS)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

Both fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 13:11, 1 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verifiable with no original research:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (references)	I can't remember if infoboxes had to be cited. I assume not.	Pass
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass
(c) (original research)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

Broad in its coverage:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (major aspects)	"The ships both were laid down in 1912", is it possible to get a date on this? You don't say when Graudenz actually hit the mine, available? Any Italian history on either of them?	Undetermined
(b) (focused)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

No exact dates in Groner or Conways, or anywhere else I've seen. Also nothing specific on the mine hit, just the reference in Campbell to that being why she wasn't at Jutland. Foreign service records are pretty slim as well. Parsecboy (talk) 13:11, 1 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Notes	Result
The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Notes	Result
The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	I doubt any images are available.	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass

Unfortunately not - I searched through the old naval annuals and such and couldn't even find a line-drawing. I suppose fair use would be acceptable at this point. Parsecboy (talk) 13:11, 1 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Result[edit]

Result	Notes
Pass	~~Almost there.~~ Passed. Buggie111 (talk) 13:44, 1 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion[edit]

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